discuss what is wrong with each of the
following thesis statements. Then revise each thesis to make it more effective.
1. In this paper, I will discuss the causes of asthma, which include exposure to
smoke, chemicals, and allergic reactions.
2. Spinning classes are an enjoyable form of exercise.
3. The crime rate is falling in many U.S. cities.
4. Living in an apartment has many advantages.
5. Children's toys can be dangerous, instructional, or creative.