02.02 A Close Look at Organization
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02.02 A Close Look at Organization: Cause-and-Effect Writing Planner (50 points)
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In 1715, Lady Mary Wortley Montagu was diagnosed with smallpox and scarred for life. She lost her brother to the disease 18 months later. After her husband became the British ambassador to Turkey, she witnessed women engrafting healthy children with a small amount of the disease. She witnessed its success and brought word back to England, even having her own children engrafted. Eventually, the monarchy listened to her educated opinion and was engrafted.
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“Throughout the last three thousand years, smallpox has shadowed civilization. A viral infection, the disease spread along trade routes, emerging first in Africa, Asia and Europe and reaching the Americas in the sixteenth century. Because smallpox requires a human host to survive it tended to smolder in densely populated areas, erupting in a full-blown epidemic every ten years or so. Wherever it appeared, the legacy of smallpox was death, blindness, and scarring.”
“In 1721, at the urging of Montagu and the Princess of Wales, several prisoners and abandoned children were inoculated by having smallpox inserted under the skin. Several months later, the children and prisoners were deliberately exposed to smallpox. When none contracted the disease, the procedure was deemed safe and members of the royal family were inoculated. The procedure then became fashionable in Europe.”
A chain of events against smallpox began as a result of Lady Mary Wortley Montagu’s mission to protect people against one of the most fatal diseases in the world. Imagine a disease with a 30% death rate cycling through every 10 years – many were affected and steps had to be taken to put an end to it.
Like Europe, America was working towards smallpox prevention thanks to Onesimus, Mather, and Boylston. Their work was so effective that General George Washington ordered a mass inoculation of the troops fighting in the Revolutionary War.
e had heard the tales that dairymaids were protected from smallpox naturally after having suffered from cowpox. Pondering this, Jenner concluded that cowpox not only protected against smallpox but also could be transmitted from one person to another as a deliberate mechanism of protection. In May 1796, Edward Jenner found a young dairymaid, Sarah Nelms, who had fresh cowpox lesions on her hands and arms. On May 14, 1796, using matter from Nelms' lesions, he inoculated an 8-year-old boy, James Phipps. Subsequently, the boy developed mild fever and discomfort in the axillae. Nine days after the procedure he felt cold and had lost his appetite, but on the next day he was much better. In July 1796, Jenner inoculated the boy again, this time with matter from a fresh smallpox lesion. No disease developed, and Jenner concluded that protection was complete.”
