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The four older siblings stopped to watch their little sister skip about the lush
ground stopping and snatching up a wild onion here and there. Travis let out a
chuckle. They would have plenty to bring home today and it lightened his burden to
acknowledge this. He drew in the rich earthy fragrance and let his shoulders relax as
his eyes followed Lydia. Their eyes met as she started to say something in an
instant her expression changed to horror and she vanished. Lydia!