Respuesta :
'The Snow Storm'
The author's word choice is very unique. Words such as 'radiant' or 'tumultuous' are words that most people don't know. With a unique title and unique word choices, it makes the story interesting.
'It Sifts From Leaden Sieves'
This author's word choice is rather (in my opinion) repetitive. The prompt itself is a bit repetitive. But, the word choice is the only thing keeping me awake.
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So, if I compare both of these prompts, I'd say that The Snow Storm is more unique because of the word choice and it's not as repetitive. The Snow Storm portrayed the prompt as if it were an actual snow storm.
The author's word choice is very unique. Words such as 'radiant' or 'tumultuous' are words that most people don't know. With a unique title and unique word choices, it makes the story interesting.
'It Sifts From Leaden Sieves'
This author's word choice is rather (in my opinion) repetitive. The prompt itself is a bit repetitive. But, the word choice is the only thing keeping me awake.
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So, if I compare both of these prompts, I'd say that The Snow Storm is more unique because of the word choice and it's not as repetitive. The Snow Storm portrayed the prompt as if it were an actual snow storm.
Answer:
I included an evaluation of the author's use of description.
I stated how her description helped me understand the topic.
I included evidence from the text to support my answer.
Explanation:
Sample Response: The author clearly describes what a light second is by including examples that her readers can relate to. She provides an example of how far a kid could run in a second and then shows just how much farther light can travel in the same time by describing the distance as "from Earth to the Moon."