Read the sentence.

To make a profit, all the snacks must be sold by the club.

Which revision most effectively corrects the dangling modifier in the sentence?


Making a profit, all the snacks must be sold by the club.
To make a profit, the club must sell all the snacks.
Selling all the snacks, a club profit will be made.
All the snacks must be sold to make a profit by the club.

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2nd choice. just read it out loud and see which sounds best

To make a profit, the club must sell all the snacks is the revision most effectively corrects the dangling modifier in the sentence. Hence, option B is correct.

What is Misplaced modifiers?

Misplaced modifiers include dangling modifiers. Because the word or words that the dangling modifier should be modifying or describing have been left out of the phrase, it has nothing to alter.

The infinitive clause in the original sentence cannot be referred to by any noun phrase. "All the snacks" is the NP that comes closest to the clause, and it can't modify that NP in any way. Therefore, it is preferable to employ an active voice sentence so that the "club," who is carrying out the action, can be modified by the infinitive clause.

Thus, option B is correct.

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