Read the conclusion to a personal statement. In conclusion, my trips to the seashore have awakened an interest in marine biology. I am ready to move forward with my dream of becoming a marine biologist. What is the best way to improve the conclusion? Add a sentence to the ending that summarizes the writer’s topic. Add a sentence to the middle that reflects on the writer’s experiences. Revise the final sentence to have a different tone. Revise the first sentence to state a future goal.