The option that revises the passage and uses a variety of sentence structures is "The sun shining brightly, fluffy clouds floating in the sky, a soft breeze..."
How to revise the sentence?
Among the options, we must try to find the one that presents variety in sentence structure. In the original passage, all sentences are independent clauses, and all of them consist of a subject and a predicate with a verb in the past form.
We can eliminate option A because it does not change the sentences at all. It simply rearranges their sequence. We can also eliminate option B because it also does not change them. It simply uses a comma to link the sentences. Option D can also be discarded because it only adds one conjunction, "and", to connect the first two sentences.
The best option seems to be letter C. It changes the verbs and, in one sentence, even eliminates the subject and the verb, forming a phrase. The clauses that were independent end up becoming dependent, so we have a variety of structures.
With the information above in mind, we can choose option C as the correct answer, "The sun shining brightly, fluffy clouds floating in the sky, a soft breeze rustling the leaves, a perfect day to relax."
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