Re-write the paragraphs adding pronouns such as "he," "they," etc.
Tim and Paul love to go to the pool. Tim and Paul's favorite thing to do is swim laps. Tim likes to do the backstroke. Tim collects all the posters of famous swimmers in his bedroom. Tim likes to do the breaststroke. Tim has collected many autographed pictures of Olympic swimmers. Sometimes Tim pretends he is a famous diver. Both boys are planning to try out for the school's swim team next year.
Tim and Paul love to go to the pool. Their favorite thing to do is swim laps. Tim likes to do the backstroke. He collects all the posters of famous swimmers in his bedroom. He likes to do the breaststroke. he has collected many autographed pictures of Olympic swimmers. Sometimes Tim pretends he is a famous diver. Both boys are planning to try out for the school's swim team next year.
