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3. Which of the following is the best revision for strong verbs in the sentence below?
Mrs. Benoit is the events organizer for a nonprofit organization.
a. Mrs. Benoit does events for a nonprofit organization.
b. Mrs. Benoit organizes events for a nonprofit organization.
c. Mrs. Benoit is the one who creates events for a nonprofit organization.
d. Mrs. Benoit turns out to be the events organizer for a nonprofit organization.
I am going between b and d.....but I'm not entirely sure...Can someone please help me and also explain why that answer is correct!?!?!? PLEASE!!

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The answer is B, just took the quick check.B makes sense and shortens the sentence. :)
MrsTate

b. Mrs. Benoit organizes events for a nonprofit organization.

Strong verbs are clear and specific. They help to create and effective sentence by allowing extraneous words to be removed. By changing the main verb to organizes, the author no longer needs to clarify what Mrs. Benoit does. This use of the strong verb "organizes" allows the sentence to be clearer and more straightforward.

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