Answer:
What is the best way to revise this sentence to eliminate wordiness and redundancy?
I enjoy power walking at a quick pace at night when it's twilight and the sky is dark.
А. I enjoy power walking at twilight.
B. I enjoy walking at a quick pace when it's twilight and the sky is dark.
C. I enjoy power walking when the sky is dark.
D. I enjoy walking at a quick pace at night.
The correct answer is D. I enjoy walking at a quick pace at night.
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