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Which revision would make this paragraph suitable for a presentation? inserting stronger verbs and a more active voice making sentences longer and more meaningful including personal and second-person pronouns revising the text with more formal language

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The revision that would make the paragraph more suitable for a presentation is: "inserting stronger verbs and a more active voice" (Option A)

What is Active Voice?

In literature, active voice refers to the forms of verbs wherein the subject is depicted directly as the person performing the action.

For example:

Dave kicked the ball (Active); instead of

The ball was kicked by Dave (Passive)

Learn more about Active Voice at;
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