I need help judging a love poem I wrote. please be honest and open. any corrections are beneficial, here it is. if you need any explanations or an input don't be afraid to msg me
This I will wonder, possibly to my demise.
is that the spark of love i see hidden in your eyes?
have found out about my feelings for you?
are you able to return then soon?
If not I understand, you have to go, be your own man.
But if you choose to I'll make a promise, never to forsake you,
only as long as that spark remains in your eyes,
and mine too, then always and forever,
my heart will belong to you.