My best friend had took me for a ride in the country and told me some news. He had said that in two weeks he was moving to another state. This news was very sudden and had shocked me to my core. My friend was more than a friend, he was a brother, a partner in pranks, a teammate in games, and a keep of secrets. After he told me, we walked in the woods together. We found it hard to say much, because we each knew what the other felt. After what seemed like hours, he stops walking and faced me. He says the move wasn't what he wanted, but how he added that his family needed him. I saw sadness in his eyes, and I knew he saw the sorrow in mine.
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This is Past Tense.
Present Tense Paragraph:
My best friend takes me for a ride in the country and tells me some news. He says that in two weeks he was going to move to another state. This is very sudden and shocks me to my core. My friend is more than a friend, he is a brother, a partner in pranks, a teammate in games, and a keeper in secrets. After he told me, we walk in the woods together. We find it hard to say anything because we each know what the other is feeling. After what seems like hours, he stops walking and faces me. He says that move wasn't what he wanted, but he added that his family needs him. I see sadness in his eyes, and I knew he sees the sorrow in mine.
I believe this is correct.
