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rhysaudenart

Answer:

It should say the racoon, not racoons.  Bear is spelt bare.  The panda bear is properly, not more properly.  The g in giant needs to be capatilized.  Pandas eat, not pandas ate.  It should not say them have a kind of thumb, it should say they have a thumb.  Giant pandas are so rare, not giant pandas they are so rare,

Explanation:
1: bare spelled wrong, it should be “bear”
2: not capitalized, I think u caught that error so u know what I'm talking about
3: it should be “eat” instead of ate
4: or should say “( they) have a kind instead of (them)
5: there is an unnecessary “they” in this following sentence... “Giant Pandas (they) are so rare that China…” you should remove the unnecessary word.
I couldn’t find the last two sorry :( I think the other person who is answering is gunna say them but here

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